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laelia
laelia
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shy away darling
black weave grieving
wants of widow
in dangle dance
toxic turvy tremors
spin a strained smile
wave a breathless
"Goodbye"


laelia
laelia
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent set

little with much said.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
oh laelia

just like Eric Clapton sings--"Got me on my knees, begging darlin please" I know, different spelling, same sentiment.

Welcome back, please stay. Only you can make me long for that black widow bite... if not to feel it at least to witness...

Excellent poem-- you have a gift not only for the imagry, but for the subtle use of rhyme and alliteration.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I've missed your work

and you haven't lost a thing

Wonderful, dreamy, heartbreaking

welcome back

Thank you

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