- Erotic Poetry
- Weekday Whimsy
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Click hereWhen I slip my fingers
into his pocket and
fill my palm with
the concealed curve
of muscle there--
sweet flesh, firm
in both laughter
and passion--
I feel leashed
to my maker, and
only occasionally
tread on his heel.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoreally good! The descriptions are fantastic, the poem has movement. Deserves a 5.
bluebellalmost 15 years agoYou've done it again. You'll have to stop or else we'll all get complexes about how we don't write nearly good enough! Heh. Really great job again. Mentioned in the thread, OF COURSE. :) Thanks for sharing.
UnderYourSpellalmost 15 years agoLeave out the ellipses you don't need them to get you point across (dreadful pun unintended!)
GuiltyPleasurealmost 15 years ago....erotica in a neat package. (pun intended)<p> Tess
bflagsstalmost 15 years agothe phrasing is a little awkward, very good poem regardless. The second -- could of just went with a comma. The first pause is fine, I just think you could do something better there besides for a "there".
