We're Not Human Anymore

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pelegrino
pelegrino
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LEMONIA (F)LEAP EDELTRAUD => UNHOLY ECHO DA LONTANO

HILLSIDE
FRIDAY
26/7/2013

WE'RE NOT HUMAN ANYMORE

I' m not human, Edeltraud, anymore,
You're not human, you are rotten to the core,
I'm not human and you made me like this,
You're not human, if that was your secret wish.

On hillside there is a loneliness tonight,
And your ghost is coming back in pale white,
Do your haunting but just give me space to breathe,
So at least I understand who I am with.

You're a ghost, my lovely babe, but still you smell!
Do you come from heaven or you come from hell?
You're a ghost, my lovely lass, but still you kiss!
Hell or heaven, this for nothing I would miss.

You're a ghost but your pale aspect is well known,
That revealed to me all things that were unknown,
You're a ghost but making love, you still can do,
I cannot fuck with a ghost, what do I do?

I just let you keep me company tonight,
In the morning you'll begin to see the light,
Fifty ways there must be to leave your lover, (link)
If it's cold you'll have to borrow my pullover.

RECAPITULATION

Some fine day I will escape from this den,
Don't know how, don't know where, I don't know when,
I will shoot your specter, pale ghost, all over,
If I miss I'll have to borrow your revolver.

pelegrino
pelegrino
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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Interesting

I like this the best of your recent poems.

There are interesting structures and pictures developed.

Not sure that using 'smell' in the third verse to rhyme with hell fits.

I do wonder what Edeltraud would say on the subject of Pelegrino?