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Click hereButterfly kisses, rose petal lips,
Probing me deeply, inside my hips.
Giving me fever, making me moan,
This that I think of, when I'm alone.
Kissing me deeply, right to my core.
Writhing and naked, there on the floor.
Making me hazy, heartbeats abound,
Stirring my insides, when you're around.
Driving erection, straining and thick.
My moist mouth, your throbbing dick.
Getting excited...these things that I wrote.
Tasting your sweetness, deep in my throat.
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NoV4meover 13 years agoAuthorHahaha...people didnt vote well on that one...I turned my votes off. I think I got most of the hurt out of me...so we'll see what's next lol
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fridayamover 13 years agobut you could cut more--look at line 4 and rephrase for rhythm. The end of line 8 weakens a good stanza, line 10 could lose "my" and "your". Do you see what I mean? I still liked it x
