tagNon-Erotic Poetrywhat did i do

what did i do

bytempleminded©

what did i do, letting you walk out that door
my heart is broken, my life is tore
thought it wouldn't hurt, that enough was enough
now that you're gone, i see i wasn't that tough
couldn't deal with things, as they kept going
got tired of the lies, and not knowing
so with much agreement, you were gone in a flash
now i'm starting to feel, i shouldn't of been so rash
when you walked away, i said i wouldn't cry
but the tears started to flow, as we said good-bye
why did i let you go, when in my arms i wanted you so
because my pride and revenge, just wouldn't let me go
what has been done has been done, and is now in the past
what should have been love, just ended real fast

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