What I want

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What I Want

I want to see the young beauty walk through the door
Sauntering towards me knowing she is my whore
My submissive companion and sexual toy
Her only duty is to bring me complete joy.

She timidly kneels lowering her eyes
Knees widespread displaying her inner thighs
She looks up below lowered lashes and gives a soft smile
Waiting to see what I have in store for her in a little while.

The minutes pass without a word or glance
But already my cock is waiting in anticipation in my pants
Finally I arise and make the few short steps to her side
She knows whatever I ask of her she will abide

She quivers silently and mews a quiet cry
Waiting for the first touch from her dominant guy
As I reach down I stroke her soft hair
Soon enough I will lay her bare

I will slide inside slowly and then start to pound
The soft inner wet sanctum of her little pussy mound
When she starts to moan I will only fuck her with more lust
Claiming her body and her complete undying trust

Sweat starts to drip slowly from her brow
Her body betrays her as she gets wet somehow
She lowers her head gently to the floor
Raising her ass giving Me her wide open sex to explore.

First come the fingers and then the soft tongue
Pressing into her becoming just one
My tongue spreads her wide and tastes the nectar
Such a joy to slide my tongue deep inside this sector.

In a moments time she is panting and moaning
I bury my cock inside her slamming her and groaning
Soon enough the cum begins to spurt
She pulls off my cock and gives it a few jerks.

Across her face the cum starts to splash nice and fresh
She rubs my jerking member across her pert breasts
As the orgasm subsides she takes me in her mouth
I once again start to slide my fingers down south.

In no time a all we are back at it again
Fucking with fever and both feeling me deep within
Her fleshy folds meant for our pleasure joined
Our bodies meld together as they meet in the groin.

Her orgasm comes now as she writhes and squeals
I can scarcely believe the pleasure she feels
All at once she collapses and breathes deep
Snuggled together we both fall asleep.

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lilmizzscandallilmizzscandalover 15 years ago
sorry

i also apologise for the amount of typos in that comment, really shocking for me as im usually a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to spelling and grammar.

lilmizzscandallilmizzscandalover 15 years ago
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i really enjoyed the description and thew way you managed to make it all rhyme was really great, and i know i'm no judge, but i found the fact that the lines had different numbers of syllables frustrating as it disru[ted the rhythm of the poem. Then again, i dont want to sound like im giving you really negative feeback because ive had some of that, and its disheartening, so ill end by saying how i enjoyed the poem. ill also leave my name so you can contact me or read my two submissions (nowhere near as good or as heavy in quantity as yours, but im a newbie)