What She Has To Give

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dr_mabeuse
dr_mabeuse
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There is something she has to give
She knows I have to take
Something from those lips
The way they tremble
beneath the whip
the way she's noble
sacrificing, insisting
throwing it at me, gifting
and I can't, I don't
I can't
get my hands
my heart
my soul
around it
enough
to get
enough
so I rage
Blind fury
tiger in a cage
Maniac hurry flurry whip engage
shouting pounding fucking slave
yield to me yield to me yield to be saved
It's only mine when I throw it away
God help me I am so fucking yours

dr_mabeuse
dr_mabeuse
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

This sounds like it would make great lyrics to a song! I love it!

CoryleaCoryleaover 15 years ago
Desperation

I love the desperate tone of this poem and the rueful realization of the last line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
perfect

absolutely perfect... violetflower

wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
well that's got me thinking!

a great portrayal of that incredibly fine line. loved this poem. i love the way the read speeds up. i like your line end words - each is important and meaningful, including 'it'. excellent.

critique - i stumbled in the 'yield' line as i misread. (i'm still learning how to read poetry without the same punctuation i expect when i read prose).