- Erotic Poetry
- What She Thought
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Click hereHis eyes were plainly on me as he stood
Across the room, imagining me nude.
And I, no better, wondered how he'd be
If we were in my bed at the night's close,
I danced with him, and saw the mighty wood
I gave him, and that put me in the mood
To let him feel his body pressed to me
In some secluded place that no one knows.
I pray that he will want to leave this place,
And that he'll go with me to where I live
Where his strong hands will strip me down to lace,
And then to skin. I'll say I want to give
My body to him, that I want to be
Beneath him, crying out in ecstasy!
- COMMENTS
Epmd607about 15 years agoi'd say a guy wrote this, because it's lacking feminine detail and females are known for detail. There's some potential in a couple lines, but there's also some really terrible lines. The end rhyme in the beginning doesn't work, the eye rhyme doesn't work. I find it pleasurable to see poets develop, I hope you work hard and post some super erotic group of lines that's wholly you and doesn't resemble 'I gave a guy a woodie.' best of luck.
