- Erotic Poetry
- When I Fantasize
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Click hereI came with you on my mind
Oh you overtook my senses
It was you that fondled and played me
Devoured my defenses
My entire being at your fingertips
They touched me everywhere
You kissed my thighs with wet lips
You said yes to my dare
And it was your sexy way
The lust in your eyes
I remember to this day
That make me touch me
When I think of you
When I fantasize
- COMMENTS
dhyvdalmost 15 years agoI like it,
but would have loved it with some more punctuation and single spacing/paragraphs, to emphasize where the meaning boundaries were.
Well, that sounds nit-picking but I think it's still important... so don't feel bad or anything; I really did like it!
