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Click hereShe told me
it is like a scene from one of his poems
you in the white lab coat
the gloves, the oils
like Mary Shelley in the "little ice age"
frozen inspiration creating new man
ice climb
electric pulse
there safe at her table
one candle
one cold castle summer
one moment of control
but here we are again
with one more confession drained into plastic
you reach for me from you chair,
hands twist from their bindings
just enough to touch my arm
please, please let me touch you
smack answered, baby we get what we come for
you came to be awakened, deprived, satisfied,
remembered, forgiven.
I will not speak of your sin
not even to you
I will find it hidden deep
your knees wide, clench teeth grimace
you will give it up to me freely
one hand on your thigh
I lean in whisper okay baby okay let it go
let it go, I will take it, let it go
try to ignore the posed family photos
in this unbearably empty house
two sickly puppies
caged, whimpering
still you pretend pretend with your brightly colored logo,
cavalier hands-free in your new leather seat lease
Mr. Power suit yes you will plead for mercy
you will weep and with this release
you will be free, you will be free
and for a moment, you will believe
as I pack my collection,
white coat into bag
as you quickly suck smoke into the empty spaces
before shame finds a way back in
You caught my attention from the title to the end. Kept me hanging like a kite, wishing for more air ... love it my friend. Very edgy and yes ... thrilling. More please ~~!!!
Loved the erotic film noir scene and the slyness of the dialog spiked the poem's intensity for me. Thanks, good poem.
and intriguing. I found it a little hard to follow but it's worth the effort.
Tess
Well, I love it. It's different, which is exciting. From one line to the next, I have no idea where the poem is going, but I want it take me to the end. Good job!
i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.