When The Doors Opened

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When The Doors Opened

The sun has disappeared and skies opened
The road was sunk, knee height it flowed.
The lunch was normal,not warm but not cold
The time was three and half I was told.

You popped up and door opened wide and noiseless
Now I was not expecting this entrance, its priceless.
Somehow wanted to be in bed, you felt tired
Body was aching muscles flexing, the massage worked.

I felt it's time to open, never been dishonest
I tried to turn the pages of your sad past.
I was unaware of those years, like a forced celibate
I found you changed a lot since you opened the gate.

It was then my turn to show the real me for you
It was tough to express but I did it some how.
I had a pessimism about how you would react then
I have to face the reality I have to take the blame.

Life gave me another surprise when you accepted me
Lets take the route together, holding hands, can't we?.
Lost time cant be made up, reasons comes crying at
Lets not think of past nor future, do it with present.

The magic words are just from my side right now
This I wish to hear from you one day somehow.
It is always lucky to have someone to understand
It is much more than that when together we stand.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Monumentally awful...

makes me want to carve out chunks of my brain to erase that I ever read this truly dire "poetry"