tagNon-Erotic PoetryWhen You Left Me

When You Left Me

bywildtiger©

When You Left Me
I nearly lost my mind
I sat and had one good cry
I could not understand why
you wanted to say good-by
you told me you found someone new
but I did not know if I could
cause I was still in love with you
you build up my hopes
just to let them down
with the things you put me through
but I did not care I was so in love with you
and for some reason
I was not convinced that
it is really over between you and i
my heart keeps telling me to love you
cause we have a chance
and even though you left my heart still says
it is not over yet



Copyright ©2005 Candy Marie Kincaid

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