tagErotic PoetryWhen you make love to me

When you make love to me

byDebbie©

When you make love to me
Stars in the sky I see
When you make love to me
I give to you so freely
When you make love to me
I am so open, honestly
When you make love to me
I touch your skin tenderly
When you make love to me
I shiver in pure ecstasy
When you make love to me
Our bodies entwine gently
When you make love to me
The earth shakes you see
When you make love to me
I give to you emtionally
When you make love to me
Our lips kiss lingeringly
When you make love to me
Our fingers touch slowly
When you make love to me
I feel so alive, tingly
When you make love to me
I cum so orgasmically
When you make love to me
I see everything clearly
When you make love to me
I love us to cum jointly
When you make love to me
I almost pass out entirely
When you make love to me
You charge me electrically
When you make love to me
I feel complete finally

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