- Erotic Poetry
- When You Owned Me
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Click hereAn evening in August
Up my stairs I rushed
and slammed shut the door to my room.
Breaking free of clothes
I switched the lights on
In the mirror stood a bare girl soon
Ah, there they were
On my skin all over
The remains of your passionate touch:
Purple, Pink, Blue—
Me, a rainbow hue
And awesomely beautiful as much.
A beauty, a charm pure
Not mine for sure
Derived definitely from your fire.
That burned my skin
With a celestial pain
A remembrance of our desire.
The smooth velvet touch
Of your cool fingertips,
Your hot lips on my breast.
Exhilarating moans
Endless gasps and groans
Songs of silence that reached beyond the crest.
Years I had wasted
Trying to happiness build
But breaking in your arms brought peace.
I thought the best would be
To own the world,
But the best was when you owned me.
- COMMENTS
tazz317about 12 years agothat has to be given freely,. TK U MLJ LV NV
pink_fireabout 12 years agoAuthorThank you for your generous comment. glad you liked it. Do vote, sweetheart...
Ashesh9about 12 years agothought the best would be
To own the world,
But the best was when you owned me.
----- Immortal Words O " pink_fire " , Immortal indeed !!
to Give is Truly more Blessed than to Take .
