tagNon-Erotic PoetryWhich foot do you hop on?

Which foot do you hop on?

byUnderYourSpell©

Which foot to hop on which one is right?
Or left the leg behind the body sways
take a tumble if it's wrong in height.

Just childhood's game a pretty sight
remember still those long gone days
which foot to hop on which one is right?

Now is your future, years took flight
look now to seek some scanty praise
take a tumble if it's wrong in height.

Peers now see you in a different light
especially one who to you money pays
which foot to hop on which one is right?

Whilst always hoping for a future bright
scaling a ladder wherever the end lays
take a tumble if it's wrong in height.

It's no good when deep within the night
no sleep comes and daytime temper frays.
Which foot to hop on which one is right?
take a tumble if it's wrong in height.

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