Whispered kisses across the skin

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I see you in the corner,
although you never look my way,
seated as you are, waiting,
for what or who I do not know.
Could I explore your uncharted waters,
cup small breasts, thumbs soft across your nipples?
You gasp. With delight? No, trepidation I think.
Hush, let me explore as I would be explored,
whispered kisses across the skin.
Woman to woman.

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buttersbuttersover 10 years ago
so it is :)

tess linked me.

a delicate, very feminine poem, creating a hushed sense of tension - an open-ended moment leading to future discovery.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Mmmmm

silky smooth and honey sweet!. The sibilence in the title sets the tone. Well worth the wait.

Tess

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Thumbs soft across your nipples

Very sexy. A man could learn alot ...

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Whispered kisses 'cross the skin

Woman to woman ......

Great Sapphic poetry & nice to see you tear yourself away from the threads to post on New Poems ! 5-ed .

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

I'll echo the previous comments. I also liked the "oblique" way the poem started which I thought heightened the erotic tension in this delightful short piece.

Another quibble: it should be "for .... whom," but that may be more important for those of us who did little more than diagram sentences and read our catechisms in parochial school(LOL)

I don't get to New Poems lately as much as I would like because of growing eldercare issues, but this was well worth the trip.

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