Whispers

bymark_j©

Shafts of filtered sunlight
        dancing on the bed
        Warms the silken pillow
        beneath your pretty head

        A smile plays lightly on your lips
        the visions you must see
        A longing for another time
        or feelings yet to be

        Whispers in the silence
        a hand upon your thigh
        The gentle rise of your breast
        you softly hear her sigh

In those precious moments
        in a world of sensual play
        You feel the touch of her hand
        her caresses start your day.
            
        June 2, 1996

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by Senna Jawa01/11/18

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This text has a composition which is very awkward to a reader, it feels outright embarrassing. There is no place here for poetry. Indeed, there is

1. N = narrator; 2. Y = you; 3. S = she.

The scene ismore...

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by pelegrino01/04/18

Beautiful and truthfull !
Thanks for sharing.

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