WhiteWash

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bleached walls have left their
mark. gruff fingers
have tried to strip
white out
all memories, washed out
to dry. mistakes made
unwrapped by misery
strayed off mark. afraid
to wipe away
for tears cried, have trailed
showing the love
showing you ...

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I like this

break in your style ...makes you a bit more real in your image...nice touch..blue

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 18 years ago
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A bit of a change of pace - different style. Looks like a sweep by you on today's reviews. Good going.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
white wash

very nice play with the topic white wash (!_!) nice write

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good

metaphor and lovely imagery here, RF

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