- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Who me?
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Click hereThe window’s glass eye watches
with a pane all its own.
It carries an inert pretense
but shows a distorted clone.
The clear stare distracts
hiding what has passed.
Catch a savvy glimpse
beyond the tralucent cast.
Held in a tenuous mien
of casual gravity.
The reflection of selfhood
trapped in endless apogee.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoAnother excellent poem. I loved the images painted in the poem, very raw. Great stuff!
Anonymousover 18 years agothose great, teeming masses!
If I don't know something, that's a challenge, not a putoff!
So, tralucent means translucent (obsolete): A thing is translucent when it merely admits the passage of light, without enabling us to distinguish the color and outline of objects through it; it is transparent when we can clearly discern objects placed on the other side of it. Glass, water, etc., are transparent; ground glass is translucent; translucent style.
Nice job, you have a way with words. Make me work!
sackover 18 years agoalthough I hope the use of "fancy words" don't keep the "masses" from enjoying this poem!
LeBrozover 18 years agoNice image painted here.
Again.
And once again we're off with a very sharp, inventive, supercharged mind {lay it on!}. What have you got there, your very own complete set of the Oxford Dictionary?
