- Erotic Poetry
- Who Wants To Spear Britney?
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Sometimes so horny
I just don't know what to do
Not even
The touch of my hand seems to satisfy
And I don't know why
Got no answers
Only questions
Just like this one
To everyone else out there
Looking to get laid
I ask this
Who wants to spear Britney?
In need of a lover
Someone stronger
Hard and long
To fill in the missing piece
My aching p***y
Is dying for
So wet and soft
Needing
Wanting
Craving something more then Kevin's got
Between my legs is this question
Who wants to spear Britney?
I'll be a slave 4 you
If you can make me cum
Shouting out loud for more
Everytime you penetrate me
Doing it
Hard and fast
Then slow and easy
Lover I'm begun having my fun
With you
Under the sheets
Asking this question so sweet
Who wants to spear Britney tonight?
Baby, one more time
Say we can
Say you will
Do me
Doggystyle
All night
Giving it up
Never gonna stop until
You drive me crazy
Up againest the wall
You and me againest the music
Of your desire so wicked and bold
OOOh yes do tell me boyz
Who wants to spear Britney tonight?
By RAMONA THOMPSON
© 2006 RAMONA THOMPSON (All rights reserved)
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis, like so much of your poetry, isn't that good
Some helpful suggestions:
1) Take some time to actually READ some poetry. See how poets craft their poems and apply this.
2) Experiment with taking a sharp image and wrapping your poem around that
3) Think about writing other things. All this silliness doesn't make for great poetry. Look around your world and find things that you truly care about. It can be anything, someone you care about, an event, even an object
4) Revise until your hands bleed
5) Play around
6) Use tight imagery and language. Become a word lover.
