Who you want me to be

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Take it away now ,
I don't want my control
Nor i ever will

Let me writhe
Let me whimper as i say your name
Feel me in my denial
Torment me with pain ,blurring reality
I beg of you
Never let me go

Push me over the edge
I want to get lost lost beneath your fingers
Again and again
Because dreams are made of this
To become who you want me to be .

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arpithareddyarpithareddyover 8 years agoAuthor
My very first in Lit

Hope you all like it .. Please let me know if it needs any improvement.

And thanks a lot for reading

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 9 years ago
I can see something here

Please keep writing, I would like to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
beautiful

Too good , would like to chat with you, pmrao31@gmail

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
SOMETIMES THE QUESTION DONT DEPEND ON THE ANSWERS

especially if they are remarks for enlightment, TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 9 years ago
Arpitha : are you in Hyderabad or

USA ?

anyways welcome to Lit from a fellow-countryman : 5-ed !!

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