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I want you back
You are not here
Why did you go?
You told me you loved me
I miss you so much
You never mentioned Maria
The girl you adore
Understand you said
As you kissed me goodbye
A girl can love a girl
Just like a guy
It is so hard
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WickedEveabout 19 years agoThe title does nothing to attract the reader. The poem does have potential, though. Here is a revision you may want to consider:
Title: A girl can love a girl
You told me you loved me.
Never mentioned Maria,
the girl you adore.
"Understand," you said
as you kissed me goodbye.
I miss you.
This is only one possibility for a revision. I think it makes a nice minimalist poem once you trim away a few unneeded lines.
