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Do I delight in pain and suffering
Why
Do I find those that shall hurt
Why
Do I twist the knife deeper in an open wound
Why
Do I make them hate me
- COMMENTS
sackalmost 19 years agoYou really don't "delight" in pain and suffering. But negative feelings can be very strong and drag us all down at times. You have a lot to be happy about, so please let your next poem be a paean to joy!!
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoI agree with Honey,
it's because we're human!
Good poem though, you
got it spot on!
Well done,
Thanks.
~ Jenn
Honey123almost 19 years agowe are human and we hurt, especially when we love.
You said it perfectly and didn't need too many words to make your point.
~Honey
Belegonalmost 19 years ago...like something that flowed straight out. sometimes that is best, to leave things at a basic level. uncomplicated does not mean the work is any less striking.
