Why Do Angels Cry?

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Death and destruction throughout the land
The rise of terrorism bands

Drugs taking over so many lives
Pollution of our water and sky

People living in the street
Women hiding from men that beat

Murders committed based on color of skin
Babies found abandoned in old trash bins

Teenage suicide is on the rise
This is why the angels cry

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KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
The ideas are right on.

I am following on Senna Jawa's notion of letting us work a bit more. Other wise the ideas are right on.

darthjserdarthjserabout 16 years ago
Life hurts

Is it half full or half empty? Maybe we can make this world a little nicer than when it first began. Good read

Senna JawaSenna Jawaabout 16 years ago
you are too good to look the other way

You can write! You proved it. Your poem has tempo, energy.

But you have written everything, and left nothing for the reader. Now I know why angels cry. You told me like you were a teacher and I were a first grade student--"this is why the angels cry". Indeed. But I would like to have things to dwell on on my own after reading a poem.

Best regards,

Senna Jawa

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERalmost 17 years ago
I like Angels

They are a good topic to wonder and to write about.

Me, I believe Angels. I've met a few in my life. Unfortunatly, the Devils in today's society and societies past far out number the Angels today.

Thanks for the poem

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERalmost 17 years ago
laughing angels

Okay, you are on the hook, now. You need to write a poem why angels laugh.

Too many of us focus on the negatives but there are way more positives than negatives otherwise, not of us would have survived our childhoods.

Good poem that made me not want to open and read the morning newspaper.

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