- Erotic Poetry
- Will
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As the lash tore into her back
and caused her scream to grace My ears,
I was quite proud of the young slave
for trusting Me to tame her fears.
It took some time, it took some work,
to strip away her fear of pain,
but I lashed out, marked her anew,
yet there she stood, held by the chain.
Another mark upon her back,
another bite upon each breast,
she drank the pain without complaint
and showed her will to pass this test.
- COMMENTS
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoHmmm...sound more like a gang member iniation.
When I read it and listen to the meter...it needs to be longer.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWhile the rhyme structure's consistent, it feels that something's 'off' here; perhaps it's the meter. Still, sure to please the BDSM niche readers.
