tagNon-Erotic PoetryWill my sinews loosen?

Will my sinews loosen?


A response to Lady Malachite's "Life, it must be Structured"

Will the structure of my life
loosen while I muse
on what you mean
the structure of life to be?

Spontaneity structured,
or perhaps, structured spontaneity,
or even, structured content evoking spontaneous worlds

Will my musing digest the sinews of my life
(the sinews that bind the structure of my life?)
as demands of continuity drift unheeded
past their point of purpose to become regrets
that murder spontaneity

structure in words
bubbles from a chaotic sea
a frozen momentary truth here and there
while I slip inexorably
through the holes in the structure

thus unhindered by structure
chaos washes through the structure
neutral to my needs

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