- Erotic Poetry
- Will You
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Click hereWhen Your sanity is plagued with uncertainty,
will You let me be Your solace?
When Your heart fills with torment or anguish,
will You let me comfort You?
When Your flesh yearns for the touch of another,
will You let me embrace You?
When Your body hungers to be fed,
will You let me be Your sustenance?
When Your being smoulders with ire and passion,
will You caress my welts and taste my tears?
When Your soul is aching and empty,
will You let me enter and give You warmth?
Will You?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoSpeaks to me in a voice I've been longing for . . . your voice . . .
Thanks for your Submission . . .
whtmtnladyover 11 years agoAuthorThank you for viewing and your comments. This was written for someone that uses the Y/i format. I will remember to change the format for others to read in the future.
Desejoover 11 years agoI'm wondering about the capitalization as well. Generally, apart from the Bible, You is not capitalized mid sentence. If the intent is to give a prayer-like tone to the poem, then it works. It's also possible the intent goes deeper than that, not sure.
