Winter Suit

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WickedEve
WickedEve
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She wants to wear me,
like a smooth-skin suit.

Wheeled closer to flurry skies,
she presses her palm
to the home's winter glass.

I remember cold.

Her voice is snow,
amazing as it falls.

She melts
when I offer lavender polish.
Young nails always glow her.
Perhaps her Alfonse will notice
next time he's out of bed.

I tell her I will visit
again, until old ladies
no longer want to wear me —
December suit, wrinkled
near the window.


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copyright d. dixon
12.14.2004
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WickedEve
WickedEve
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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 15 years ago
So many............

....beautiful images. I love poetry that creates a picture, a feeling and an emotional response, three out of three.

Tess

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 15 years ago
Beautiful as a photo of someone one loves

Her voice is snow,

amazing as it falls.

--Gorgeous. Thanks, Eve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
the feel

of this is... is... can't put it in words. It goes with the title, and in a good way. It comes across and lasts.

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