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Click hereThe Winter wind
wages war against
the Fall
Attacking its camouflaged
leaves
Drying them up
and shaking them
Until they fall
like tiny corpses
on a cold battlefield
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LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Two small points:
To be possessive, "it's" should be "its"
And, in a matter of style, perhaps the ending should read,
"in a cold
battlefield"
Sounds better this way, at least to me.
