- Erotic Poetry
- Witches Brew
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Double bubble toil and trouble,
We mix our magic brew.
Eye of lust
Mingled breath
Whispered words
Velvet touches
Slippery, snaking heat.
With a final taste, a smile of satisfaction
We bottle in our memories what we have made.
The perfect kiss.
- COMMENTS
sackover 16 years agoYes, the rhythm is a bit unorthodox...I think the first two thirds of the poem work better than the last third. However, this is so witty it doesn't really matter. Thanks for sharing your considerable talent!
foehn2over 16 years agoDo you use rhythm consciously or unconsciously? That aspect of this poem is most interesting. Four trochees in the first line, three iambs in the second, and then dimeter, for four lines, and suddenly, out of the blue, pentameter. I found the mix a little unsettling at first, but kind of fell in love with it after several readings. After "memories" there should probably be a comma, or the word "of." I trust that that simply passed you by. (Poems can be edited, here.) I hope to know you, more.
