With you with out you

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To be with you is a intangible dream
because
there    are       spaces     &       barriers.
useless    &     cruel  ;    spaces
Marseille    to     Aix - en provence
Train          to                                       station
spaces         unavoidable    ,       irritating
wish earth a one place
 

A   table   full   of   delightful   Indian  food
is inhuman
to keep us apart
four legged monster well decorated
who do you think you are?
just wooden junk , I will break your leg!
 

Crumbs of Nann
sticking to your moustache
juicy chicken thigh
playing with your taste buds
mouth watering glorious Gulab Jamun,that goes inside you, happily
How come food stole my place?
 

Finally, a bed to unite us
what a deception!
that one inch between us;
then your soft but firm skin;
that organ inside me;
stops at one wall;
your mouth, lips & tongue;
can not swallow me full;
your ribs so strong;
like the guardians that block;
the entrance of my soul;
to your body;
that armoured tattoo;
engraved to your skin;
shield of your heart;
blankets, clothes, pillows;
boots,socks & pants;
everything block me, mercilessly...

Why are you absent mon amour
when you are there?

Be with me when you are with me
Go, open the gates of your soul
Youandme should be one, one day
because Iloveyou and youaremine
with no space!

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redpassionredpassionover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Sometimes I don't like the existence of the other person as a separate person. I miss my lover most when he is around me! Strange...

Master6xwordsMaster6xwordsover 10 years ago
Distance

The distance of miles is hard enough but distance between two when together is the worst.

Yes, time is another big factor. Different time zones, not having time to spend together or even talk. Time passes by too quickly when together and lasts too long when apart.

Opening the gates of the soul is wonderful when it does happen.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
no space

Thought provoking musings on lovers and space. You missed time, the cruelest boundary of all.