- Non-Erotic Poetry
- with-zen
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
With-zen~
I sit
'with-zen'
my own mind
at my desk
looking at nothing
thinking of everything
'with-zen' my knowledge
satisfying
my tranquility
with mountain lakes
and streams
'with-zen' the trees
never
giving thought
to hurricanes,
volcanoes and tornadoes
mother nature's clash
with-zen
When
I spilt 'hot' coffee
in my lap
it was 'with-zen' my legs
I screamed
with-zen
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44over 18 years agoeven though you are trying to capture a wholeness to the experience, i'm thinking it would pack far more punch if you went with this persay:
I sit
'with-zen'
my own mind
at my desk
looking at nothing
thinking of everything
'with-zen' my knowledge
When
I spilt 'hot' coffee
in my lap
it was 'with-zen' my legs
I screamed
with-zen
it's an option art.....don
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoI like it ZMA but didnot know about it all. Alicia says with-zen is a pun and says wizen and within to! VERY good and much better to like alot!! Thankyou!!
quietpoetover 18 years agoRegardless of the apocalyptic events or not, it is a good read, different and moving. I love the hypocrisy of the "fan club" commentor! There is nobody here that doesn't have a few people who like them and look forward to reading their posts. Keep up the inspiring work...
part of your "fan club"
qp
