Within a room….

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A ROOM IN A HOUSE

is not like a home TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
to wait.

This poem strikes a magical balance of warmth, whimsy and mystery. The last line says it all, "Waiting is nothing but an exquisite prelude."

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
KOLKORE...

Thank you for appreciating the challenge one faces when imaging a poem. Isn’t it grand one now can collect FANTASY AIR MILES® reward miles! I’m experimenting with different software that hopefully will work in concert w/ the site’s submission procedures. Bear with me, please. Thank you once again for sharing your compelling comments. FYI, the photo was taken from w/ in my new home, a renovated barn.

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
Tess...

thank you for your comments. Sometimes, some are in that mood :) Until I select the best software to overcome that shrinkage thing, one has an easier read by using the magnifier. As an illustrated poet Tess, do you have any suggestions/recommendations re software? How 'bout you, neonurotic, do you have any to offer?

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
Anonymous (perchance neonurotic/everso bad)....

as a fellow illustrated poet, I’m pleased you liked the image. I held hope that punctuation would lead the eye. I’m sure you enjoy the artistic challenge/marriage of font/spacing as much as I. And I agree with you, it takes practice and I need more. ‘Tis in part why I’ve elected this medium; I welcome the challenge. Thank you for your comments.

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