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am
god
of a
reign
a rain
of mind
distinct
drops of
hailstorms
and instinct
always right
in my capsule
but not enough
zeal to respond
profess this deity
outside my pool
and let drops of
my callous cool
communicate
with you
I
am
the
tear
water
traces
a trail
of drops
so silent
travelling
for descent
a final goal
to obliterate
myself against
the nether land
an end so grand
where silk meets
a soulmate frame
and glacier ends
let me merge
with you
marked this as one of my favorite poems, I love the rain-and thoughts of writing of rain, and the drops you used were so creative and well, unlike the usual. They remind me,of tears rolling down a face, waiting to land gracefully into their destination. To be absorbed,Let it be earth, for the moisture grows roots, long and wild.. okay, now I am writing my own poetry. LOL., truly awstruck by this one !!
sGp
I could write poetry. Alas! I must read Lit's best. Very inventive.
. . . words. "that weave their weary paths and die."
DANG! If this keeps up I am going to run out of "5"s. :)
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