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frozen slice
of in between
clings to a
copy of then
stretched out
on paper frame
a perfect
photograph
cunningly cut
balanced beauty
still this vision
absorbs each orb
and tilts my head
right left right
to solve that
strange riddle
those
glass
beads
cut out of motion
are they bubbles
soaring
or drops
falling
?
...the form and flow of this poem. The last few lines are just lovely. The whole is a winner.
wonderful poem..."a perfect
photograph
cunningly cut
balanced beauty
still this vision
absorbs each orb"
love that phrasing.
jim :)