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- Word Games
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Click hereCoaxing lime from a twist of light
this blight of blackened green leaning
on light post, her hem a balance
between intent and carelessness.
Disheveled chestnut hair destined
to cascade on fading newsprint
in some Singapore alleyway
the ping of her heels pierce crosswords --
legs spread in an hourly fag.
With a quick slip of drunken breath,
deadly cum and then the anguished
withdrawal all for a twenty
or a ten when the night is bad.
Errant word games in rotting mud
of distant lies forever pain
while pleasure’s touch is equity
in some Singapore alleyway.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoFinally someone in the poetry category that can actually write!
PoetGuyabout 13 years agobut the rather elaborate language, particularly the beginning, seems at odds with the narrative of the poem. The line "while pleasure's touch is equity" is an interesting comment on the exchange.
Perhaps Poet Guy needs to think this over more, but it doesn't quite work for him. Well above the typical Literotica poem, of course. The vote (4) was relative to your own work.
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years agoA five from me. Such great choice of words.....
....."Disheveled chestnut hair destined
to cascade on fading newsprint
in some Singapore alleyway"
as well as the lines already quoted. Good stuff.
Tess
Maria2394about 13 years agoI agree with the previous 2 comments and would have chosen the exact same lines they quoted.It seemed a little hard to read aloud, maybe it's just me. I don't have my audio hooked up, so I can't hear you read it. I need to remedy that.
~ maria
twelveooneabout 13 years agothis does look like a crossword, so the overall tone is bad, however along the way:
Coaxing lime from a twist of light
this blight of blackened green leaning
this is pretty good word weaving
but (for me) it does start to sputter to the gutter but what does it matter, none of it fatal.
100
