Would You Mind It?

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patientlee
patientlee
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Would You Mind It?

Inspired by a text from hubby. We share a bed, but I still thought his message was cute.

Would you mind it if I snuck
Into your room at night
And gazed upon your naked skin
By the street lamp's dim light?

Would you mind it if I watched
You sleep so peacefully
And in your slumber saw you dream
And hoped you'd dream of me?

Would you mind if I unzipped
And pulled out my hard dick?
I'd start to stroke myself a bit.
Your nipple I would lick.

Would you mind it if I slipped
In bed right next to you
And touched your pussy while you woke
And hoped you'd touch me too.

Would you mind it if I slid
My cock in all your holes?
And when we fucked we both would feel
The mating of our souls.

You know I wouldn't mind at all
If you fucked me tonight.
You are my husband after all.
You are my soul mate, right?


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7 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
PLEASE RESPOND TO MY ENTREATIES

and don't ask May I Call A Friend while you think of a reply TK U MLJ LV NV

pranaykathapranaykathaover 3 years ago

This is so cute. So sweet of him to ask if she would mind him doing something she usually doesn't think unusual. So tender and caring, yet so steamy and arousing. Wow!

MSTarotMSTarotover 9 years ago
Just wow.

Very, very good.

Speechless.

MST

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
After reading twenty poems...

This is the first one that actually had something to say. Most people either get really pretentious, and start spouting flowery phrases that don't mean anything, or they try to express a feeling without digging deep enough to do it well. This was cool because you actually painted a picture that anyone could relate to. Even though it was fairly simple... I dug it.

DoopeyDoopeyover 9 years ago
beautiful

I can imagine myself there.

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