Wrinkles

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Milkweed is turning color
Green fades into yellow

The smell of dust kicked up on dirt road

Long stalks of dried up grass
House a thousand grasshoppers
Singing their days away

The way the setting sun reflects
off a birch leaf waving in the breeze

Summer is an old man
Still hale and hearty
But age is showing on his face

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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
plenty good

grasshopper, love your metaphors, last stanza best of all :)

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
Great title

and the last stanza really sets the poem. Good work!

I wonder if summer knows about botox?

thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11over 19 years ago
all i can say

is it made me sigh, but in a good way

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Old men get lines on their faces...

...by grimacing at the sun. (Sadly, I find more and more true everyday!). I loved the feel of this, my favorite passage being:

"a thousand grasshoppers

Singing their days away

The way the setting sun reflects

off a birch leaf waving in the breeze"

Even that internal rhyme felt right!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
yes it is

quite simple, quite effective, enough clues, that makes the ending hit you.

Made me smile.

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