- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereI shopped for a peach
seeing with your eyes
the yellow yearning,
seeking without bruise
as is our wont
failing, I chose two
and planned to eat the
soft, darkened spots first
- COMMENTS
Tathagataalmost 20 years agoto accept the bad first, to get it out of sight, This is much more complex that it first appears
fawniealmost 20 years agosaving the best for last.. or are the softer bruised spots the sweetest? nice metaphor!
normal jeanalmost 20 years agodepending upon the variety and there are many and in fact, there are white peaches too!
this is a very complex poem, not in anything physical, but on a much deeper level. I see it as a message of hope and willingnes to let go, very good :)
Eumenidesalmost 20 years agoAlthough I don't think a peach is particularly yellow, I liked where you were going with this one. Keep writing. Sometimes these short, sweet, simple poems are riveting. You have that capability. Now just smooth out the edges.
