- Erotic Poetry
- Yellow Inbetween
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Click hereYellow Inbetween
Heavy rain soaked snow,
Thrashing towards the earth,
Suppressing rising yellow-brown rookery,
Terra of the in-between.
4791 miles,
dividing
the physical us
World of the in-between.
A yellow ware mug, purchased for you,
Sipping, warm, rich coffee,
Lips meeting on a shared rim,
Dissolving the in-between.
Encapsulating blond shower,
Fluent hot water rolling over goose bumps,
Sitting, looking up, your manhood alive in my mouth.
Watching you float inbetween.
Lemon walls, echoing lust,
Spread open and vulnerable,
Deep expulsion within the cavern of trust,
I scream lost inbetween.
You are blue, I am green,
Me blue, you green?
Fusion of spirits
Yellow inbetween.
dlt March 9 2005
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoloved it more now, <grin>
The poem had been worked on for awhile
and thanks Du for allowing me to see it
grow <smile> poem sprout and blossomed
WickedEveabout 19 years agoYou should post this on the board and get some suggestions for a revision. This poem deserves it. It's very close to being Damn Good!
