- Illustrated Poetry
- Yin & Yang
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- COMMENTS
MyNecroticSnailover 17 years agowe are talking about a balance here.
It reads
Too little,
Too late. in the white (positive)
Belittle,
Berate. in the black (negative)
Love & Hate (both outside)
THIS IS A CLICHE
You have a failed poster, that is cliched, and just plain wrong. How is the postive (too little, too late) the equal of the negative?
A better read may be:
Berate and belittle
Too late with too little
love.
That may take it out of the poster realm and put it in a bumper sticker space.
You can take this anyway you want to, but that is reality, and since the pursuit of zen is supposed to be the discovery of the ultimate reality, I would just take this as an honest crit.
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agoI like your yin yang (~_~) sheer poetry <grin, I like the idea of an image to go with th words, nicely done Scott!
