you and i


You and I

We stood before a crevice, you and I.
We jumped, we landed, we made it.
The jump from the thin, icy surface of strangers, to the glassy surface of acquaintances.

We stood before a chasm, you and I.
We leapt, we landed, we made it.
The leap from the fragile glass surface of acquaintances to the solid rock of friendship

We stood before a cliff, you and I.
We fell, we continued falling, are still falling.
The fall from the hard rock of friendship, to the weightless freedom of lovers.

Now still we are falling, you and I.
Take my hands, be my wings, help me fly!
The flight from the weightless freedom of lovers, to the eternal paradise of heaven.

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