tagNon-Erotic PoetryYou Are Remarkable

You Are Remarkable


Just the sound of your voice
Captured me right from the start.
Then the flash of your smile
Brougt happiness to my heart.

As I listen to you speak
I hear so many diffrent things
So much confusion and doubt
About the path your future will bring.

It makes my heart ache
To hear all that doubt
When, to me, you are a prize
Someone, the world could not
do without.

You are so young and so strong
You have your whole life is ahead
With your intelligence and kind heart
Nothing else needs to be said.

From the top of your bald head
Down your chest and beyond
Baby you are so damn hot
I could just go on and on

You are gentle and loving
Romantic and kind
So damn sexy and sweet
I cant get you out of my mind

You are an exceptional lover
As well as a true friend
A fantastic combination
That I hope will never end

For you I want only the best
All the love and happiness
And all the joy and success
All your dreams come true
YOu deserve nothing less

Keep your eye on the future
While living for today
Even when things get difficult
Baby, you will find your way

You can rely on me
We are friends for life
Our bond is cemented
Even after you find your wife.

Today I may teach you
And hopefully you'll learn
To believe in yourself
And find a purpose thats firm.

So please believe in yourself
As I believe in you
Know that your potential is great
And there is NOTHING you CANT do.

--Lynn White 9/10/06 For Ray

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