You Are So Pitful

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A dark rewrite/parody of the classic song You Are So Beautiful

Written for my ex

You are so pitful to me
You are so pitful to me
Can't you see
You're nothing I ever hoped for
You're nothing I could ever want or need
You are so pitful to me


Such agony and despair you bring
Such agony and despair you bring
Like a hellish neverending dream that haunts me both day and night
Hell's gift to me
Mikey boy, you are so damn pitful to me

2008 Ramona Thompson

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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ah, Ramona, I saw where this was going - just from the title.

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