tagErotic PoetryYou made me Swoon

You made me Swoon

byDeniseNoe©

"You Made Me Swoon"
By
Denise Noe


How I loved watching you, the two
     of you,
Daniel Schlarchet and
     Craig Chester,
as those alliterative
     killing
     lovers,
     Leopold and Loeb,
in Swoon exchanging a ring
     through tongue
"If I do what you want --"
     "I'll do what you want."

The film shot in mortician
          black and ghost white,
shades so right
     for the love of
Loeb and Leopold, a love
by which life was
          destroyed:
where Bobby Franks
should live, they left:
          a void.

"Taking the payment,"
     hand grasping wrist,
Leopold:  "enjoying the
     privilege
          of inserting his
     penis" between Loeb's
legs -- but no!  Between his
     beefy butt cheeks!
Oh!  how watching you, the two
     of you,
     Daniel Schlarchet and
          Craig Chester,
          made me
     Swoon.
Thank you!

Report Story

byDeniseNoe© 1 comments/ 2716 views/ 0 favorites

Share the love

Report a Bug

1 Pages:1

Please Rate This Submission:

Please Rate This Submission:

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Please wait
Recent
Comments
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

There are no recent comments (1 older comments) - Click here to add a comment to this poem or Show more comments or Read All User Comments (1)

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel