- Erotic Poetry
- You made me Swoon
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Click here"You Made Me Swoon"
By
Denise Noe
How I loved watching you, the two
of you,
Daniel Schlarchet and
Craig Chester,
as those alliterative
killing
lovers,
Leopold and Loeb,
in Swoon exchanging a ring
through tongue
"If I do what you want --"
"I'll do what you want."
The film shot in mortician
black and ghost white,
shades so right
for the love of
Loeb and Leopold, a love
by which life was
destroyed:
where Bobby Franks
should live, they left:
a void.
"Taking the payment,"
hand grasping wrist,
Leopold: "enjoying the
privilege
of inserting his
penis" between Loeb's
legs -- but no! Between his
beefy butt cheeks!
Oh! how watching you, the two
of you,
Daniel Schlarchet and
Craig Chester,
made me
Swoon.
Thank you!
- COMMENTS
normal jeanalmost 16 years agotruly enjoyed, even though I didn't recognize the characters in your poem right off. You really are good writer. I saw your bio and plan to visit your sites and read your other work soon as I can.
best wishes,
NJ
