tagNon-Erotic PoetryYou Should Be So Lucky

You Should Be So Lucky


Saturday we did the beach thing
sunny skies above dancing waves,
several times I fought back the tears
overcome by what she gives me

having much more than I deserve
tends to haunt me on brilliant days,
afraid the law of averages
is finally catching up to me

knowing I'll never repay
a debt as dear as this life,

I'll only wish you the same...
         to have more than you deserve

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