Non-Erotic PoetryYour DemonsI see you alone
In the dark
Hiding in the shadows
So no one approaches
In the dark
You think your beautifully broken
I think your intensely creative
Your life with charm
You think you are beautifully broken
You think your heart is dark
I see the light parts of your heart
Where you reach out to people in pain
You think your heart is dark
You find yourself unworthy of redemption
I think your heart has demons
That will never go away
You find yourself unworthy of redemption
I see the good that has already earned it
I think your heart has demons
That can be tamed
I walk over next to you
Hiding in the shadows
I stand next to you
I see you alone no more
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Thank you
It is my favorite so far :)
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I love it!!!
Wow. Just, wow!! You are a very talented writer!
Thank you...
Yes, it would make for a better read. However, I wrote this for a special friend. I used his words :)
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Nicely done
I felt the spirit and sentiments you express clearly. I would have broken up the line:
"You find yourself unworthy of redemption" or just left it "you find yourself unworthy" for a smoother read.
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