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Click hereComparing lover's eyes with pools is a special metaphor. But when we read "everlasting embrace", we will know that are indulge and swimmy the poet wants to express.
Nice description of looking into those eyes but again, would have been helped by a careful edit.
and you're really captured the various feelings in very descriptive words..