- Erotic Poetry
- Your Skin
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Click hereWarm and strong and smooth.
Your mouth on my mouth. Your chest on my chest.
Tangled together, we move.
I bury my face in your neck.
I breathe you in.
Your fingers squeeze.
Our bodies press.
The bones of our hips
push and bruise.
I slide against you.
I moan.
Sink in.
Your naked cock against my thigh,
seeking softness.
Penetration.
I grind against your leg.
You glide between my lips.
I squeeze tight and hold you there.
Wet and slick and faster, mounting.
You pierce.
I open wide.
I crave.
Solid. Hot.
You inside.
I hold onto wanting you.
Eyes half open, filled with lust.
We rub and search and taste and tease.
You plunge.
I groan with grateful shock.
Stay forever.
Fuck me in and out.
You pound.
I pull.
I grasp you from inside.
We push and writhe and faster, harder.
We pant.
Lost in the course of our connection.
I yell. I cry
your name.
You whisper.
Baby. Baby. Little girl. You feel so good. You'll never know.
Don't stop. Don't go.
Another moment I don't want to end.
You pumping into me.
You on the edge.
I cum. I gasp.
You thrust.
So hard.
Fill me.
I'm there. Lost, dying, swirling.
I squirm.
You twitch.
We rest.
I lay my cheek against
your skin.
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years agocriticism may be hard to swallow, simply put... express your feelings with words of passion (~_~) nice write!
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWelcome to Lit with your first erotica posting. It takes a certain amount of courage to write something and place one's self out there in the form of the written word. Having said that, first, let me second Maria's comment and then add that another feature that lessens this piece's impact are all those very short sentences, almost like a PowerPoint presentation; like erotica with bullets. Let your thoughts and sentences flow, use commas and semicolons; let your thoughts and feeling come alive in your readers' minds. Keep writing and watch yourself grow.
Maria2394about 17 years agobut as far as poetry goes, you need to work o showing , not telling.
keep up the work-- practice makes it easier, and one day, presto!! you will be drawing your readers in, making them feel the poetry and not just narrating a sex act.
best wishes,
maria
