Yours Til The End

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submissive erotic poem
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I want you..filling me..stretching me..deep inside me
Loving me, taking me, owning me completely
I'm yours, your total sex slave
You know how I love it, each and every wave
Touch me..tease me..make me cum
Until we both come undone
Whisper in my ear how good I feel
While you fuck me hard with all your will
Bite me..spank me..pull my hair
Give me all of you if you dare
Grinding..thrusting..pounding my wet heat
Never..ever..letting me retreat
I want it, I need it, oh so very bad
You give me such pleasure, unlike any I've ever had
Cum for me while I squirt for you, over and over again
Give it all to me baby, because I'm yours till the end


By. Jennifer Moody

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1hotmama7061hotmama706almost 6 years agoAuthor
Thx for the critique!

I definitely appreciate all forms of feedback since I'm an aspiring poetess. Thx for taking the time to comment.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 6 years ago
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I'd like this (and most of your submissions) if it wasn't all rhyming couplets which get wearying to the eye after a while. If you write for the public to read please do consider how this affects your reader! Please come the Poetry forum where you'll learn other forms to write in and will be very welcome. This isn't criticism by the way it's critique :)